OnyxMyr's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Journey in yourself]

So far so good...

You have something good going here, but what you need is to complicate it a little more. To be honest, nobody on newgrounds just wants to hear plain classical music. Try making this a little more interesting to listen to. Add some percussion or piano or something like that. At the moment it's just too simplistic.

[Mystic Waterfall]

Too Simplistic

It needs more sounds. The beginning was alright, but when you started switching to that heavy sound it kind of ruined it. Keep working on it, it certainly has a lot of potential. It just doesn't feel like a whole lot of effort was put into it.

[~|| Mister Monker's 'Bang Out']

Nice

I'm not sure how much credit I can give to you for this song, but I have to say it's pretty good. The heavy sounding techno sounds mixed well enough with the piano to make it sound very nice. Great upload.

T-Free responds:

Thank you, OnyxMyr.^^
I you want to know how much work is by me, you can listen to Mister-Monker's original song.^^

[Looking Forward]

Decent

Those hi hats are overused in most techno songs, which kind of bothered me. Plus it was a bit too heavy, if you know what I mean. Other than that it wasn't bad.

[~'{Rivaura}'~ (SytrusMissions)]

Nice

Very smooth and well put together. All the elements of the song worked perfectly together, the only thing I could pick out was that the drums didn't work all that well with the background. They came in a bit rough, you may want to work on bringing them in with a smoother fashion.

Kid2Will responds:

Yeah I kinda wanted a rough entry. Supposed to be like a major change happening within a body. unfamiliar so therefore sporatic =) Thanks for the review!

[The Gentlemen Club]

Lol

I found this pretty damn funny.

[I am Sad]

Cool Beat

I really like how you picked it up after the beginning; a perfect transition. Those lyrics were pretty funny too, I'm not sure why, but they were.

Scrototype responds:

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it! I took a look at your music and left you a review as well. :)

[DJ Bossler - Inspector Gadget]

Great remix

As far as remixes go, this is pretty good. I like the synth you used for it too.

bossler13 responds:

yea, it had the right sound in my opinion. thanks for the review!

[west coast(demo)]

Nice

You've got a nice old school rap beat going on. But what you really need are lyrics to go with it. A beat like this should never be left alone, it just sounds too damn much like something you'd sing over.

dragoooon responds:

thanks for the tip, but i don't rap.

[Frozen Echoes]

Decent

It wasn't bad. It needs to be smoothed out a bit in some places, specifically the hi-hat. Other than that it had a very cool feeling to it, a feeling that really suits it's name.