OnyxMyr's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~'{Rivaura}'~ (SytrusMissions)]

Nice

Very smooth and well put together. All the elements of the song worked perfectly together, the only thing I could pick out was that the drums didn't work all that well with the background. They came in a bit rough, you may want to work on bringing them in with a smoother fashion.

Kid2Will responds:

Yeah I kinda wanted a rough entry. Supposed to be like a major change happening within a body. unfamiliar so therefore sporatic =) Thanks for the review!

[I am Sad]

Cool Beat

I really like how you picked it up after the beginning; a perfect transition. Those lyrics were pretty funny too, I'm not sure why, but they were.

Scrototype responds:

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it! I took a look at your music and left you a review as well. :)

[DJ Bossler - Inspector Gadget]

Great remix

As far as remixes go, this is pretty good. I like the synth you used for it too.

bossler13 responds:

yea, it had the right sound in my opinion. thanks for the review!

[west coast(demo)]

Nice

You've got a nice old school rap beat going on. But what you really need are lyrics to go with it. A beat like this should never be left alone, it just sounds too damn much like something you'd sing over.

dragoooon responds:

thanks for the tip, but i don't rap.

[House Theme (Remix)]

Good without being a remix

I've never heard the House theme, so I can't say how good of a remix this is. But I can tell you that it's a nice song by itself. Very stable beat and a calming rythmn. Nice work on this one.

killdude69 responds:

Thank you. Well, if you ever want to listen to it, just listen to either the House M.D. theme song, which has no vocals, or the entire song it is based on (it's in the commentary.

[New Friends & New Adventures]

Decent

You've got a decent beat going on here. Nothing in particular that's wrong with it that I can pick out. Keep it up, you'll get better at composing. I gave you a five to help you with your goal by the way. ;)

Tagiito responds:

Thank you!!! you really helped my drive to move forward. :D

[Hardcore Test #2]

Nice

You did a nice job on this whether or not it's hardcore. It wasn't perfect though, around 1:00 it started getting a little annoying. It needs to be smoothed out a bit, at the moment some parts don't mix too well together. But don't worry about fitting into a certain genre, if you think it sounds good, than upload it. Don't follow anyone else, do your own thing.

SpliceMan responds:

Thanks for the review, I'm fairly new with this genre - the only thing I know is that hardcore is based around Distortion.
I'll take your advice for when I submit a full version!
~Splice

[Cheese Acapella loop]

Lol

You can't go wrong with a ballad about cheese now can you? This made me laugh, so I'll rate it 5.

Stalagmite responds:

AWESOME! thank you so much man! like the first review and first listen first five and first ten! all on my first submission!
there is something weird going on with the number one!
and look... its lurking in the ten like a velvet child...
thank you so much for your kidness mr 1! :D
thanks alot :D:D:D

[Internal Nocturnal]

Calming

I have to say the name of the song could use improvement, but the music itself is very calm and smooth. It should really be a loop though, to be honest it doesn't really change much. It's more like background music at the moment.

kingtaco16 responds:

it does change a little bit more than you think it does, but thanks for the eight
yeah about the names, i name em all that way

[Dance, yo.]

Nice

I like how much depth you give to it with the reverb. Very nice beat too. Everything mixes very well together, I also like how you added a piano.

elektrobear responds:

Thanks! The piano is definately one of my trademarks.