OnyxMyr's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Faster the Treadmill]

Great animation

Your animation is always incredible and this one is no exception. Your art style is clean and easy to look at, and the animation is as always very smooth. The music fits very well with the video, and gives it this distinct indie feel that really sets this apart from other music videos and allows it to simply be what it is; an entertaining and adorable animation. It's obvious that a lot of work was put into this, considering that all the artwork was done by hand.
Amazing work, I Fight Dragons should be proud to have this as the music video for one of their songs.

[Duality Complete]

Amazing animation and atmosphere

Your animation style is amazing, and it's obvious you put a lot of effort into this. The characters and the atmosphere are engaging, the music also fits it very well. Overall it's an amazing piece, certainly impressive for your first submission (congratulations on that), and absolutely deserving of front page.
My only critique would be that it's very short. The ending occurs before you want it to, and there isn't really any sort of climax or closure to this fascinating world that you've created. I'd love to see you create a more full-length version of this in the future.

Weenog responds:

Thanks for the review dude, i'm glad you liked it but i don't know if i'l be building on this concept any further. Most likely try something completly different next time.
anyhoo, take care & thnx again ^^

[Spanish Love Song]

You've improved

Don't think I've ever seen anyone improved their technique so quickly, I remember you're first submission, and I'm surprised at how good you've gotten. You need a voice actor though, at the moment all you can do are music videos.

[A Day In Suburbia]

Doesn't need talent.

What people don't understand is that you don't need to be a talented flash artist to make a good flash. You just need to have a clever idea, and you get an 8/10 for the idea. Very clever, and it's even funnier if you actually live in suburbia.

TheLemonCurdler responds:

thank you sir

[The Girl From Memory]

Too Literal

In my opinion you took the line about turning her into them too literally, I think by turning her into one of them, it means that she was made into a ruthless killer like the invaders. Other than that and the fairly average animation it was a good interpretation.

[//Necropolis Xenophobe]

Nice, but...

You've got a good idea, and you're a good animator, but the story telling fell flat. It just felt kind of sketchy, like the whole plot was done in patches that weren't sewn together all that well. Overall it was very entertaining though.

[Stamp on the Ground]

Johnny?

Was one of those characters supposed to be Johnny the homicidal maniac?