OnyxMyr's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[@ndrea - Silver Rose]

Meh

Nothing special that would make it your own. This honestly can be easily topped by many of Dimrain47's tracks.

[Evil-Dog - Outbreak]

Nice

Sounds a lot like the soundtrack from Silent Hill, which is a compliment.

[Requiem For A Dream - Remix -]

Nice

Personally, I think this remix deserves more recognition, it's better than some of the more popular ones. You keep the beat steady, and use a nice combination of synths. I also like what you did with the rythm in the background.

[Requiem for a dream {LDL}]

Alright

I don't understand why people like this particular remix so much. It's good, and I'm not saying I can do better, because I can't. But to be honest the synth didn't sound all that great, and then the whole song has this massive build up and I can tell that it's trying to be really mindblowing at the climax, but I just don't think it worked. By the end of a Requiem remix I should be think "wow, that was awesome!", but this one just didn't do it for me. It fell short.

[World of Sin]

5 for the lyrics...

You have a talent for writing lyrics, but the background music is not very well done, and it's too quiet. Your voice overpowers the actual beat of the song, and this makes it way more noticable when you're lyrics aren't in sync with the beat of the song. For this I think that you should've collaborated with a composer to do your backbeat, while you write the lyrics.

seangames1 responds:

i completely agree, but unfortunately it isn't my decision, i'm in charge of the lyrics and the vocals, everything else is the job of my friend max. but thank you, you're a badass

[Shouldn't be Thinking of Her]

Good

It's still a little rough, but in general very good. It has a unique sound, and I like that, you aren't afraid to use unconventional instruments. Good luck cleaning it up though, it'll sound really nice.

aloneagainfriend responds:

Yeah, we try for a very unique sound. We like that too ;)
And yeah, thanks for wishing me luck on cleaning it up, too. Since EVERYTHING is ran through differant amps, cabs, effects, EQ's, ect. That is goin to be VERY hard. :P

Thank you! glad you listened (: & voted a 5 :) Feel free to check out the rest of our stuff too. XD

[[H] random!]

Cool

Great beat, I especially like the low chanting you put in there. This is without a doubt worth putting words or something to though, you should consider collaborating with someone so that you can add lyrics to these backbeats. They really have a lot of potential.

Hypnotik7 responds:

thx :D

[Let The Goblins Dance (Demo)]

Nice

This is pretty good by itself at the moment. The only thing I would complain about is that fact that there's a lot of places throughout the song that are out of tune. I would really fix that if I were you. But this definatly has a massive amount of potential, you should continue working on it.

[Anger or Sadness?]

Beautiful

This composition is beautifully done. It's nice to see some good classical music on newgrounds, it's a nice change from the usual heavy techno you find on here. The piece was performed very well too.

Yngvi responds:

Thanks.
It's true that most stuff here on newgrounds has a bit the same structure.
So I thought: "let's do some freestyle classical piece" and I think it turned out pretty well.
But any constructive criticism is very welcome.