OnyxMyr's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[House Theme (Remix)]

Good without being a remix

I've never heard the House theme, so I can't say how good of a remix this is. But I can tell you that it's a nice song by itself. Very stable beat and a calming rythmn. Nice work on this one.

killdude69 responds:

Thank you. Well, if you ever want to listen to it, just listen to either the House M.D. theme song, which has no vocals, or the entire song it is based on (it's in the commentary.

[New Friends & New Adventures]

Decent

You've got a decent beat going on here. Nothing in particular that's wrong with it that I can pick out. Keep it up, you'll get better at composing. I gave you a five to help you with your goal by the way. ;)

Tagiito responds:

Thank you!!! you really helped my drive to move forward. :D

[Hardcore Test #2]

Nice

You did a nice job on this whether or not it's hardcore. It wasn't perfect though, around 1:00 it started getting a little annoying. It needs to be smoothed out a bit, at the moment some parts don't mix too well together. But don't worry about fitting into a certain genre, if you think it sounds good, than upload it. Don't follow anyone else, do your own thing.

SpliceMan responds:

Thanks for the review, I'm fairly new with this genre - the only thing I know is that hardcore is based around Distortion.
I'll take your advice for when I submit a full version!
~Splice

[Cheese Acapella loop]

Lol

You can't go wrong with a ballad about cheese now can you? This made me laugh, so I'll rate it 5.

Stalagmite responds:

AWESOME! thank you so much man! like the first review and first listen first five and first ten! all on my first submission!
there is something weird going on with the number one!
and look... its lurking in the ten like a velvet child...
thank you so much for your kidness mr 1! :D
thanks alot :D:D:D

[Internal Nocturnal]

Calming

I have to say the name of the song could use improvement, but the music itself is very calm and smooth. It should really be a loop though, to be honest it doesn't really change much. It's more like background music at the moment.

kingtaco16 responds:

it does change a little bit more than you think it does, but thanks for the eight
yeah about the names, i name em all that way

[Dance, yo.]

Nice

I like how much depth you give to it with the reverb. Very nice beat too. Everything mixes very well together, I also like how you added a piano.

elektrobear responds:

Thanks! The piano is definately one of my trademarks.

[DJland0 - Slipped]

Keep trying

That synth that's playing throughout the entire song is way too overpowering. It doesn't really mix well with the background (which was well done, by the way). To me it was good, but the synth really ruined it, especially in the beginning. If you do a remake of it, you could have a really nice song on your hands.

land0lakes responds:

Alright, I should probably do that, I see what you mean... I'll PM you if I do end up doing that. I don't know, i was just fooling with the different patches and I found thaat synth one, so i decided to use that.

Anways, that you for the review.

[Lockjaw's Saga Redux]

Great

Great tune, great beat, great song. Very nicely done.

[DJD-M - Legated]

A good first song.

You have some good beats going on, but at the moment it's really more of a back beat than a song. You need some sort of instrument to kind of lead the whole song. Right now it just seems sort of incomplete. It's a good first upload though, I've heard worse first tries.