OnyxMyr's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[What You Believe In]

Great

As far as hardcore goes, this is pretty good. It certainly deserves more recognition, that's for sure. Keep it up, you've got a lot of talent.

culmor30 responds:

Thanks :D

I never have gotten very much recognition, I'm hoping that my album will give me some. But yeah, I'll keep it up for sure p:

[[MilliBEAT] - Bounce]

Nice Beat

You have a great beat going with this one, it was a little boring in the beginning, but it picked up. The only thing I can suggest is to change it up a bit more, for about the first minute of the song it felt very repetitive. Other than that it's a nice song.

[Don't Ignore Me]

Odd

Not really sure what to make of this, you have a decent beat near the end though, I'll give you that. I suppose it's interpretive, eh?

fishfood2021 responds:

This is not music. Just vote this shit down.

[Its Recess]

Good...

You have the right idea, but you need to fine tune some things here and there. Perhaps add a little bass, it felt a little too in your face. It's very loud, and a tadd obnoxious if you know what I mean. Some people happen to like that though, so I'm not going to give you a bad rating because of my own personal taste. Overall it has a very nice beat though.

ninjex15009 responds:

Trust me dude i know what you mean by 'not to your taste' in all seriousness it was more of a joke but i thought it didn't turn out too bad and like you said, some people listen to that so i figured i'd see what people thought. Thanks for the review though.

[~Ambient Basstester~]

Good

Can't go wrong with a simple tune like this, now can you? Nice work, aside from getting a little too loud in some parts (resulting in some static), it's a nice song.

Dj187 responds:

thanks for the review =]

whats too loud at points?

[Gloom Carnival]

Nice

Nice job, aside from the synth being a little out of tune in some areas, it was a great composition. It would certainly be better as background music for a game or film though, rather than music just to listen to. But as far as background music goes, this is better than most of the stuff they already put in movies these days.

[Creation Project]

Nicely Done

All the different elements of this composition just blend together incredibly well. The only thing I noticed was that the tune changed around a little. Sometimes it had a reggae kind of feel to it, and at other times it was slow and a bit sad. But overall a very nice job.

[-=gabber speedway route 566=-]

Nice

Although it's a bit too noisy, with everything overlapping like that, it's a well done song. The beats work well together, and it certainly has some pretty good moments. Nice job.

Limitless450 responds:

gabber=loud but thx for the comment man it was alot better than what the other people thought of it

[Electrometer]

Meh.

You definatly need to fine tune this some more. Mabye add a little more bass, it sounds a bit soft. Not to mention the different beats fighting eachother all the time, if you know what I mean. Above all I would fix the beats so that they work together smoothly. At the moment it sounds very rough.

[Spring Seranade]

A good idea in theory

I see where you were going with this, and I can definatly tell you're new with FL studios. The song had a very empty feel to it, like it was just the whipped cream on a desert, but no desert. You need to add some bass, to give it a bit of a background tune. The pad you use should also be toned down a bit, I suggest putting it into the mixer and lowering it's volume. It overpowered the rest of the song, and made it annoying, to be honest. In theory you had a good idea with the general tune of this piece, but I don't think you executed it very well. I think if you practiced using FL Studios more, you could definatly make some beautiful tracks. So good luck, and I hope you continue making music.