Interesting
I like the way you use very non-generic instruments in this piece. The melody was also very nice, although hardly consistent. If you were going to redo it, the one thing I would tell you to do is to try to keep one kind of melody in the song. At first I was like, this song is making me a little sad, but later on the tune changed drastically from a depressing beat to a very video game-like up beat sound. Other than that, very nice work, especially for your first.